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A song I've been working on for the past year and a half called Ol' Bandit. Sorry about the video quality. Let me know what y'all think.

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A song I've been working on for the past year and a half called Ol' Bandit. Sorry about the video quality. Let me know what y'all think.

Sorry, I couldn't get it to play.

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JanHaskell JanHaskell

There were saloons in the Wild West - no liquor stores.

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Linnster Linnster

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Thank you for pointing that out. For rhyming's sake it stays the same. You could call a saloon a liquor store in a sense. Becauase it's somewhere you can buy liquor.

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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Absolutely go for rhyming over accuracy. :)

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Linnster Linnster

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I bet you any amount of money in the wild west you could go somewhere to buy liquor. It's more than accurate. I don't understand why you felt the need to nitpick a very minor part of the song. Not everything needs to be taken so seriously.

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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Liquor in bottles didn't begin until the middle of the 19th Century. In the Wild West, liquor consumption was either in a saloon or made at home (moonshine).

As for nit-picking, I brought a fact to your attention. Apparently you took umbrage at that, so I will not do it again. Not everything needs to be taken so seriously. Have a nice day.

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Linnster Linnster

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I take my music very seriously because it's the most important thing to me in this world. I spent HOURS upon HOURS rehearsing this and trying to come up with the best lyrics I could because I want to impress people.
After all that hard work just to hear something like there were no liquor stores you're damn right that irritated me. It's like if you spent a long time writing a poem that meant a lot to you personally and for me to say that it's not good enough.
Do you think that I or anyone else who REALLY appreciates music cares about one simple sentence? No they appreciate the effort made into creating a piece of art. If you were pointing out some constructive crticism instead of a condescending remark I would have taken it a little better.

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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Then you should take my advice and solicit only positive comments.

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Linnster Linnster

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One of the last songs I posted you seem to have a habit of posting condescending remarks.

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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You asked what people thought and I believe I said I couldn't understand any of the words. If there was another song, I believe I said it wasn't my type of music. If you think that's condescending, the problem is yours and you should stipulate that you only want positive opinions.

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Linnster Linnster

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It's not positive opinions I want FEEDBACK constructive feedback. Not just a snide comment

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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It wasn't a snide comment. It was a statement of fact. Clearly, you couldn't care less what I think of your music so why are you belaboring the point?

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Linnster Linnster

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When you question my choice of words you are questioning my intelligence and yes it did irritate me and I did feel the need to defend my musical baby.

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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Your lyrics made an incorrect statement and I pointed that out to you. I didn't criticize your intelligence I pointed out an incorrect statement. Would you have been happier if instead of what I said I told you the song stunk? If you prefer that, I could make you happy.

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Linnster Linnster

Constructive feedback would mean, there were no liquor stores maybe you could use _
I couldn't really hear you maybe you could ____
Suggestions and feedback are way more helpful than a statement

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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I could hear the words otherwise I wouldn't have made my comment. Following your advice, here's a suggestion, since there were no liquor stores in the Old West, perhaps you could rework your lyrics to be more factual. How's that? Better?

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Linnster Linnster

Any suggestions from you on how to do that? Seeming is you are more musically inclined and lyrically aware than I seem to be?

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

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Sorry, I just nit-pick the lyrics. I don't fix them. You get the last word. I'm finished with this thread.

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Linnster Linnster

I think you are a very talented guitar player, and that the gist of your song is pretty good, as is your voice.

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