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It sounds nice, but I'm very much a lyric person and couldn't really hear the lyrics. Best wishes to you!

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JanHaskell JanHaskell


OK was that long ago? I couldn't understand the words, diction and easy to understand lyrics make for a hit song. Good luck!!

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LorraineTwevlehundredRaineTwelvehundred LorraineTwevlehundredRaineTwelvehundred

I had difficulty understanding the words, too. Maybe you need to sing louder than the guitar music.

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Linnster Linnster

It sounds nice, but I'm very much a lyric person and couldn't really hear the lyrics. Best wishes to you!

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JanHaskell JanHaskell

What everyone else said. It does show a lot of potential for a great song.

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Tiffanee Tiffanee

Great song I like it

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Man, that is freaking awesome. I could listen to that several times.

Constructive criticism tho: Pronounce
better the lyrics.

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azlotto azlotto

hell yeah

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KevinBarner KevinBarner

I'll post the lyrics later, but thank you guys!!

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CiscoKarpe CiscoKarpe OP

I really liked it a lot, it had an Aaron Lewis/Staind feel to it(that I love)...the only critique I have is that it went on too long, I'd just shorten it by a minute.
I got the gist of the lyrics you were singing so that wasn't a problem for me, eh most still can't figure out the words to the lyrics that Plant(Zeppelin) or Scott(AC/DC) were singing either, so you're in great company!!(y)

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