Janet likey :P
I'm glad you do!!
With a band it might be a good song. Not a bad hook. It sounds like the pitch of your vocals is good, but you need to project your voice more, even for singing with an acoustic like you're doing there. Singing lessons would probably be helpful. Letting your voice fly isn't always easy at home, but you need to find some place you can let go and really belt it out for the sake of practice.
That recording was made while someone was sleeping in the other room x)
I now have access to an acoustic jam space
It does have a really good sound.
I couldnt make out all of the lyrics, though
I put the lyrics in the comments
Im sorry, im on a mobile site, dont see them.
Sounded good tho
Ser just wrote in your lyrics
I do really like your words.
Thank you ser.
You are my watcher, and i appreciate that you are there
You really really need help to make an acceptable recording. And don't swear at people that you want to hear opinions from.