There are several musical connoisseurs on here... Markymark is one of them...oh and Serenity...she adores music...they are the ppl you should be speaking to...
And could you also write down what type of music it is? Classical, Rock...etc... That might help, Cisco. :)
I have a hard time labeling my music anything other than music.
I don't necessarily have a specific genre in mind when I write my music.
Yes, I would like to have the lyrics to both songs.
Derail my train, fogging up my cloudy brain.
Relieve my pain, doing it anyway that I can.
Smoke in chains, life's the carpet I'm the stain.
And I'm counting, counting down slowly
I don't want to waste my time anymore.
This I know for sure
Every little thing I try to do, nothing that I feel is ever true, every single point I try to prove it's useless.
You give and you give and they're gonna take it away from you.
Then repeat the verse and chorus
Well, I think that is called a lament, which means a sad song. You need to work on an introduction, which is a short instrumental bit that lets people figure out that you are about to start singing and they should settle down to listen.
I have a couple songs where I do lead into the lyrics, this one was my last idea for a song so it's just a rough draft.
Cisco - You are just so nice to look at, too bad I can't understand a word you sing.
I'm becoming more fond of acoustic sessions. I do have a group of people I jam with.
It's good man. You need some changes. I've often found those by just putting 2 songs together, sometimes 3. You don't want the song to feel the same all of the way through. You need a build up and a climax. That being said; you're doing fine young man. Just mix it up a little more.
I end up molding two songs together, all of these songs are just rough drafts. What I have written is how it stays until I come up with something else I like.
DW, I've been playing since I was 4.
That's for damn sure. Those guys were fucking whacked. Very talented and misunderstood.
I can't sleep man. I've got to take my momma's ashes to church in the morning and I just can't sleep. Jeesh. Still though, I understand this young dude's lust for writing original music.
me too; I whistle all of the time. People want to kill me for it sometimes.
This is just one of those occasions that pot should be legal for.
Are you singing in a band?