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Her Eyes are the Sun (Original song)One of the first songs I ever wrote.
CiscoKarpes avatar Music
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It sounds nice, but I'm very much a lyric person and couldn't really hear the lyrics. Best wishes to you!

OK was that long ago? I couldn't understand the words, diction and easy to understand lyrics make for a hit song. Good luck!!

Man, that is freaking awesome. I could listen to that several times.

Constructive criticism tho: Pronounce
better the lyrics.

I'll post the lyrics later, but thank you guys!!

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